I created a blog for the Doula program I am helping to pull together. It is pretty basic right now but I would love your feedback and thoughts. Once we get more details I will be adding venue, hotels and all that logistical stuff.
http://coloradodoula.blogspot.com/
Let me know if you see any spelling mistakes (my biggest problem)!!
4 comments:
At first glance, you are missing punctuation after the first blue sentence.
Will look more later. It is already live though, isn't it?
It looks great! I did notice in the following sentence:
If you has already taken the DONA or CAPPA training and you take advantage of the above discounts by the dates listed, you can have the workshop for $300 which is an incredible deal.
It should be, "If you HAVE..." Not sure if you care about commas in compound sentences. I think there may have been a few compound sentences there... but didn't spend a lot of time looking.
Good luck! Looks like A LOT of work!
THANK YOU for all your help. I really appreciate it.
Except Dave- he was a jerk... just kidding.
Went back to look today as I actually have time (work day today) and I noticed that you took out/cleaned up all the compound sentences. Looks great! Very clear and precise now. You beat me to it! I was excited to pull out my English major "red pen". :)
Cheryl
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